New story based on online gifs

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New story based on online gifs

Post by Leem » Wed Aug 16, 2017 10:30 pm

I've just posted a new story, Infinite Voyage, loosely based on a couple of online animations that I found. It's quite short at just 1300 words so it won't take up too much of your time.

I've been feeling slightly neglected of late, so please visit my site and my Tumblr and give me all of the worship and adulation that I so richly deserve. Thank you.

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Post by dmuk » Fri Aug 18, 2017 3:02 am

Neat story for a short-short; works well with the pictures too!

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Post by Leem » Fri Aug 18, 2017 12:26 pm

dmuk wrote:Neat story for a short-short; works well with the pictures too!

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Re: New story based on online gifs

Post by zapped! » Fri Aug 18, 2017 4:33 pm

I like the character's ongoing struggle between pleasure and her fear of the unknown. It has a very helpless and claustrophobic feel to it, as the experience is told from an internal point of view, (which is the hardest way to write, in my opinion). An entirely original piece that's as well thought out as it is written.
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Post by Leem » Sun Aug 20, 2017 11:44 pm

Thanks, guys. I appreciate your comments. PS I've nearly finished another story that's a bit longer, so stay tuned.
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Post by thestatuemaker » Tue Aug 22, 2017 12:59 pm

Another great story Leem! Thank you : )
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Re: New story based on online gifs

Post by Leem » Wed Aug 23, 2017 12:03 am

OK, the NEW new story is now finished! It's a bit longer at 4800ish words, and I've indulged my literary pretensions a bit.
Anyway, it's called Adrift. See what you think.
http://p-synd.com/adrift.htm
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